2014년 12월 7일 일요일

Final Draft

No one can decouple between human dan sports. My topic is there is a relationship that affect the game between sports and the human mind. This topic is not hard thinking. You can see many examples of my topic. Here are some examples. Suppose a situation, in soccer games, that one famous star player should show best play because he has so many fans. Therefore, he must have a burden to fulfill fans’ anticipation. We can also find an example in archery. When player shoots the arrow, he will be affected by his feeling. It can change the result of the game. So player should adjust their mind stable. As you know, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. Today, many people love sports, and no one can separate them from sports. However, sports affected by specific thing like my example. That is the human mind...
I think there is an inevitable relationship between sports and the human mind. Most people don’t know that there are many factors that can change the game. Also, most people don’t care player’s feeling when they see a sports games. They just can think only player’s abilities. However, player’s mind is crucial in sports game. Human mind can be your feeling, mind-set, etc. Human mind always has a strong influence on sports. As per Human mind, result of sports game will be different. If player's mind is anxious, it will cause a bad result in the game. In contrast, if player’s mind is peaceful, it will cause good result in the game. We can relate this to sports psychology. As my definition, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. And the psychology is the scientific study of the human mind and the reasons for people's behavior. Finally, sports psychology can be a combination of this two things...
My purpose that I write this essay is to find some relationship between sports and the human mind. And My purpose also can be persuading those who think that sports and the human mind are not related. What I wrote in the introduction is almost my assumption. My argument needs supporting data such as ideas, experiments, experts, and so on. It is not enough to appeal my argument. So I researched some sources to supplement my opinion. Then. I could find many sources what I want to show my reader. ..
However, We can artificially alter the result of sports game. It is so-called Mental Skills Training For Sports. Mental Skills Training For Sports is mental training that make players best condition by controlling their feeling or thinking for overcoming their stress in the situation of extreme tension. It can be abstract name to ordinary people, but it is very sympathetic among players. For example, Park In Bee, who is a golfer known as a best player, said mental training was one of the factors that she could achieve victory. Last putting can move big money. If players face that situation, they must be able to be nervous. At this moment, mental training shows its effectiveness. ..
Similarly, sports psychotherapy can be a good example. Sports are required to concentrate for game because sports are enacted in strong tension. Therefore, players’ a mental state has a decisive effect on the result of the game and athletic performance. Kim Byung Hun, degree of doctor, said, “sports psychotherapy is one of the studise that make athlete best condition to demonstrate their ability at full bore.” When we see a sports game, we often hear that “How that player can make a critical mistake in an important situation? It is very regrettable. This mistake can’t be made by that extraordinary player...” There are many examples that players who usually do a good job make a mistake. Because players can’t overcome their anxiety, their mental state is broken. This problem can be solved by sports psychotherapy. Think one sports player. At first, he begins his athlete's life like any other one. Soon, he showed superb play in his game. Thereafter, he becomes most famous player, and he takes center stage. The problem starts from this. Anxious feeling that he must show best play every his play or he always make best result will pressure him. Moreover, he thinks 'how do I if I make a mistake that gives disappointment to my fan?'. Because of these factors, he will feel anxiety so that he worry about his scheduled game. Sports psychotherapy can remove this player's anxiety. Sports psychotherapy is removing anxiety and tension that player feel negative emotion in the stadium and giving player's confidence a boost...
Moreover, Kim Byung Hun did not miss that player’s sports cultures are changed largely. Urgency that a player must win a gold medal almost disappears. Also, players enjoy their sports more than before days. “In 1970 and 1980, purpose of players and the persons concerned is only to win a gold medal. Medal supreme principle is spread, and people can feel pride by seeing this aspect. However, over the age is change, urgency for a gold medal becomes rare. Instead, players can get pleasure even though they win a bronze medal. It is positive in the psychological aspect.”
Some people disagree about relationship between sports and the human mind. However, there are so many examples of the relationship between sports and the human mind such as Mental Skills Training For Sports and sports psychotherapy. Furthermore, I can give them my example. I like basketball very much, and I am being actively interested in our school basketball team. When I play basketball, my performance is changed by my feeling. Of course, the cause can be a physical problem, but my body is unscathed. If my mind is in chaos, I can't show my best play. At this situation, I can't get even noe point. However, if I have feeling that I am in heaven, I record the highest score even my position is not shooter. ..
Lastly, my argument that there is an inevitable relationship between sports and human mind is proved by many experiment or example. Now we can prove my argument according to my confirmation part. We can confirm it in mental skill training and sports psychotherapy. Finally, players are affected by their mind. Therefore, we can see sports and the human mind are related. If there is a person who doesn't be influenced by his mind, he must be trained very well. In other case, he might be a robot....

2014년 11월 14일 금요일

Second Draft

No one can decouple between human dan sports. My topic is there is a relationship that affect the game between sports and the human mind. This topic is not hard thinking. You can see many examples of my topic. Here are some examples. Suppose a situation, in soccer games, that one famous star player should show best play because he has so many fans. Therefore, he must have a burden to fulfill fans’ anticipation. We can also find an example in archery. When player shoots the arrow, he will be affected by his feeling. It can change the result of the game. So player should adjust their mind stable. As you know, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. Today, many people love sports, and no one can separate them from sports. However, sports affected by specific thing like my example. That is the human mind.
I think there is an inevitable relationship between sports and the human mind. Most people don’t know that there are many factors that can change the game. Also, most people don’t care player’s feeling when they see a sports games. They just can think only player’s abilities. However, player’s mind is crucial in sports game. Human mind can be your feeling, mind-set, etc. Human mind always has a strong influence on sports. As per Human mind, result of sports game will be different. If player's mind is anxious, it will cause bad result in the game. In contrast, if player’s mind is peaceful, it will cause good result in the game. We can relate this to sports psychology. As my definition, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. And the psychology is the scientific study of the human mind and the reasons for people's behavior. Finally, sports psychology can be a combination of this two things.
My purpose that I write this essay is to find some relationship between sports and the human mind. And My purpose also can be persuading those who think that sports and the human mind are not related. What I wrote in the introduction is almost my assumption. My argument needs supporting data such as ideas, experiments, experts, and so on. It is not enough to appeal my argument. So I researched some sources to supplement my opinion. Then. I could find many sources what I want to show my reader.
However, We can artificially alter the result of sports game. It is so-called Mental Skills Training For Sports. Mental Skills Training For Sports is mental training that make players best condition by controlling their feeling or thinking for overcoming their stress in the situation of extreme tension. It can be abstract name to ordinary people, but it is very sympathetic among players. For example, Park In Bee, who is a golfer known as best player, said mental training was one of the factors that she can achieve victoty. Last putting can move big money. If players face that situation, they must be able to be nervous. At this moment, mental training shows its effectiveness.
Similarly, sports psychotherapy can be a good example. Sports are required to concentrate for game because sports are enacted in strong tension. Therefore, players’ a mental state has a decisive effect on a result of the game and athletic performance. Kim Byung Hun, degree of doctor, said, “sports psychotherapy is one of the study that make athlete best condition to demonstrate their ability at full bore.” When we see a sports game, we often hear that “How that player can make a critical mistake in the important situation? It is very regrettable. This mistake can’t be made by that extraordinary player...” There are many examples that players who do usually a good job make a mistake. Because players can’t overcome their anxiety, their mental state is broken. This problem can be solved by sports psychotherapy. Think one sports player. At first, he begins his athlete's life like any other one. Soon, he showed superb play in his game. Thereafter, he becomes most famous player, and he takes center stage. The problem starts from this. Anxious feeling that he must show best play every his play or he always make best result will pressure him. Moreover, he thinks 'how do I if I make a mistake that gives disappointment to my fan?'. Because of these factors, he will feel anxiety so that he worry about his scheduled game. Sports psychotherapy can remove this player's anxiety. Sports psychotherapy is removing anxiety and tension that player feel negative emotion in the stadium and giving player's confidence a boost.
Moreover, Kim Byung Hun did not miss that player’s sports cultures are changed largely. Urgency that a player must win a gold medal almost disappears. Also, players enjoy their sports more than before days. “In 1970 and 1980, purpose of players and the persons concerned is only to win a gold medal. Medal supreme principle is spread, and people can feel pride by seeing this aspect. However, over the age is change, urgency for a gold medal becomes rare. Instead, players can get pleasure even though they win a bronze medal. It is positive in the psychological aspect.”
Some people disagree about relationship between sports and the human mind. However, there are so many examples of the relationship between sports and the human mind such as Mental Skills Training For Sports and sports psychotherapy. Furthermore, I can give them my example. I like basketball very much, and I am being actively interested in our school basketball team. When I play basketball, my performance is changed by my feeling. Of course, the cause can be a physical problem, but my body is unscathed. If my mind is in chaos, I can't show my best play. At this situation, I can't get even noe point. However, if I have feeling that I am in heaven, I record the highest score even my position is not shooter.
Lastly, my argument that there is an inevitable relationship between sports and human mind is proved by many experiment or example. Now we can prove my argument according to my confirmation part. We can confirm it in mental skill training and sports psychotherapy. Finally, players are affected by their mind. Therefore, we can see sports and the human mind are related. If there is a person who doesn't be influenced by his mind, he must be trained very well. In other case, he might be a robot..

2014년 9월 28일 일요일

First Draft



There is no people who didn't make contact for sports. My topic is there is relationship that affect the game between sports and human mind. This is not hard thinking. You can see many examples of my topic. Here is some examples. Suppose a situation, in soccer games, that one famous star player should show best play because he has so many fans. Therefore, he must have burden to fulfill fans’ anticipation. We can also find an example in archery. When player shoot the arrow, he will be affected by his feeling. It can change the result of game. So player should adjust their mind stably. As you know, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. Today, many people love sports and no one can separate them from sports. However, sports affected by specific thing like my example. That is the human mind.
I think there is inevitable relationship between sports and human mind. Most people don’t know that there are many factor which can change a game. Also, most people don’t care player’s feeling when they see a sport games. They just can think only player’s abilities. However, player’s mind is very important in sports game. Human mind can be your feeling, mind-set, etc. Human mind always has a strong influence on sports. As per Human mind, result of sports game will be different. If player’s mind is bad when they play the game, they will cause bad result. In contrast, if player’s mind is good when they play the game, they will cause good result, too. We can relate this to sport psychology. As my definition, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. And psychology is the scientific study of the human mind and the reasons for people's behavior. Finally, sport psychology can be combination of this two things.
My purpose that I write this assay is to find some relationship between sports and human mind. And My purpose also can be persuading those who think that sports and human mind are not related. What I wrote in the introduction is almost my assumption. My argument needs supporting data such as ideas, experiments, experts, and so on. It is not enough to appeal my argument. So I researched some sources to supplement my opinion. Then. I could find many sources what I want to show my reader.
However, We can artificially alter the result of sports game. It is so-called Mental Skills Training For Sports. Mental Skills Training For Sports is mental training that make players best condition by controling their feeling or thinking for overcoming their stress in situation of extreme tension. It can be abstract name to ordinary people, but it is very sympathetic among players. For example, Park In Bee, who is a golfer known as best playrt, said mental training was one of the factor of the victory. Last putting can move big money. If players face that situation, they must be able to be nervous. At this moment, mental training shows its effectiveness.
Similarly, sports psychotherapy can be good example. Sports are required to concentrate for game because sports are enacted in strong tension. Therefore, players’ a mental state has a decisive effect on result of game and athletic performance. kim byung hun, degree of doctor, said “sports psychotherapy is one of study that make athlete best condition to demonstrate their ability at full bore”. When we see a sports game, we often hear that “How that player can make critical mistake in important situation? It is very regrettable. This mistake can’t be made by that extraordinary player...” There are many examples that players who do a good job usually make mistake. Because players can’t overcome their anxiety, their mental state is broken. This problem can be solved by sports psychotherapy. Think one sports player. At first, he begins his athlete's life like any other one. Soon, he showed very good play in his game. Thereafter, he becomes most famous player, and takes center stage. The problem start from this. Anxious feeling that he must show best play every his play or he always make best result will pressure him. Moreover, he think 'how do I if I make mistake which gives disappointment to my fan?'. Because of these factors, he will feel anxiety so that he worry about his scheduled game. Sports psychotherapy can remove this player's anxiety. Sports psychotherapy is removing anxiety and tension that player feel negative emotion in stadium and giving player's confidence a boost.
Moreover, kim byung hun did not miss that player’s sports cultures are changed largely. Urgency that player must win a gold medal is almost disappeared. Also, players enjoy their sports more than before days. “In 1970 and 1980, purpose of players and the persons concerned is only to win a gold medal. medal supreme principle is spread and people can feel pride by seeing this aspect. However, over the age is change, urgency for gold medal becomes rare. Instead, players can get pleasure even though they win a bronze medal. It is positive in psychological aspect.”
Some people disagree about relationship between sports and human mind. However, there are so many examples of it like Mental Skills Training For Sports and sports psychotherapy. Futhermore, I can give them my example. I like basketball very much, and I am be actively interested in our school basketball team. When I play basketball, my performance is changed by my feeling. Of course, the cause can be physical problem, but my body is unscathed. If my mind is in chaos, I can't show my best play. At this situation, I can't get even 1 point. However, if I have feeling that I am in heaven, I record the highest score even my position is not shooter.
Lastly, my argument that there is inevitable relationship between sports and human mind is proved by many experiment or example. Now we can prove my argument according to my confirmation part. We can confirm it in mental skill training and sports psychotherapy. Finally, players are affected by their mind. Therefore, we can see sports and human mind are related. If there is a person who don't be influenced by his mind, he must be trained very well, or a robot.

2014년 9월 21일 일요일

Week 10


Lastly, my argument that there is inevitable relationship between sports and human mind is proved by many experiment or example. Now we can prove my argument according to my confirmation part. We can confirm it in mental skill training and sports psychotherapy. Finally, players are affected by their mind. Therefore, we can see sports and human mind are related. If there is a person who don't be influenced by his mind, he must be trained very well, or a robot.

2014년 9월 20일 토요일

Week 9


Some people disagree about relationship between sports and human mind. However, there are so many examples of it like Mental Skills Training For Sports and sports psychotherapy. Futhermore, I can give them my example. I like basketball very much, and I am be actively interested in our school basketball team. When I play basketball, my performance is changed by my feeling. Of course, the cause can be physical problem, but my body is unscathed. If my mind is in chaos, I can't show my best play. At this situation, I can't get even 1 point. However, if I have feeling that I am in heaven, I record the highest score even my position is not shooter.

2014년 9월 14일 일요일

Week 8


However, We can artificially alter the result of sports game. It is so-called Mental Skills Training For Sports. Mental Skills Training For Sports is mental training that make players best condition by controling their feeling or thinking for overcoming their stress in situation of extreme tension. It can be abstract name to ordinary people, but it is very sympathetic among players. For example, Park In Bee, who is a golfer known as best playrt, said mental training was one of the factor of the victory. Last putting can move big money. If players face that situation, they must be able to be nervous. At this moment, mental training shows its effectiveness.
Similarly, sports psychotherapy can be good example. Sports are required to concentrate for game because sports are enacted in strong tension. Therefore, players’ a mental state has a decisive effect on result of game and athletic performance. kim byung hun, degree of doctor, said “sports psychotherapy is one of study that make athlete best condition to demonstrate their ability at full bore”. When we see a sports game, we often hear that “How that player can make critical mistake in important situation? It is very regrettable. This mistake can’t be made by that extraordinary player...” There are many examples that players who do a good job usually make mistake. Because players can’t overcome their anxiety, their mental state is broken. This problem can be solved by sports psychotherapy. Think one sports player. At first, he begins his athlete's life like any other one. Soon, he showed very good play in his game. Thereafter, he becomes most famous player, and takes center stage. The problem start from this. Anxious feeling that he must show best play every his play or he always make best result will pressure him. Moreover, he think 'how do I if I make mistake which gives disappointment to my fan?'. Because of these factors, he will feel anxiety so that he worry about his scheduled game. Sports psychotherapy can remove this player's anxiety. Sports psychotherapy is removing anxiety and tension that player feel negative emotion in stadium and giving player's confidence a boost.
Moreover, kim byung hun did not miss that player’s sports cultures are changed largely. Urgency that player must win a gold medal is almost disappeared. Also, players enjoy their sports more than before days. “In 1970 and 1980, purpose of players and the persons concerned is only to win a gold medal. medal supreme principle is spread and people can feel pride by seeing this aspect. However, over the age is change, urgency for gold medal becomes rare. Instead, players can get pleasure even though they win a bronze medal. It is positive in psychological aspect.”

2014년 9월 13일 토요일

Research

Source:
Sports psychology, the reason that they are indomitable.
http://www.skkuw.com/news/articleView.html?idxno=11168

My Topic:
There is relationship between sports and human mind.



What I hope to learn from this source:
I want to get some data that can attack my opponents who disagree my argument or supporting data.

Notes:
1. Sports psychology has some limitations about effectiveness of training.

2. Sports psychology is applied for various sports game.

3. Korean Sports psychology will be developed.

Final Thoughts:
This source can be reference data. In this article, it show the limitations of Sports psychology. Mabe I need some strong data that can defend that limitations.

Week 7


I think there is inevitable relationship between sports and human mind. Most people don’t know that there are many factor which can change a game. Also, most people don’t care player’s feeling when they see a sport games. They just can think only player’s abilities. However, player’s mind is very important in sports game. Human mind can be your feeling, mind-set, etc. Human mind always has a strong influence on sports. As per Human mind, result of sports game will be different. If player’s mind is bad when they play the game, they will cause bad result. In contrast, if player’s mind is good when they play the game, they will cause good result, too. We can relate this to sport psychology. As my definition, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. And psychology is the scientific study of the human mind and the reasons for people's behavior. Finally, sport psychology can be combination of this two things.
My purpose that I write this assay is to find some relationship between sports and human mind. And My purpose also can be persuading those who think that sports and human mind are not related. What I wrote in the introduction is almost my assumption. My argument needs supporting data such as ideas, experiments, experts, and so on. It is not enough to appeal my argument. So I researched some sources to supplement my opinion. Then. I could find many sources what I want to show my reader.
 

Week 6


There is no people who didn't make contact for sports. My topic is there is relationship that affect the game between sports and human mind. This is not hard thinking. You can see many examples of my topic. Here is some examples. Suppose a situation, in soccer games, that one famous star player should show best play because he has so many fans. Therefore, he must have burden to fulfill fans’ anticipation. We can also find an example in archery. When player shoot the arrow, he will be affected by his feeling. It can change the result of game. So player should adjust their mind stably. As you know, sports are games such as football and basketball and other competitive leisure activities which need physical effort and skill. Today, many people love sports and no one can separate them from sports. However, sports affected by specific thing like my example. That is the human mind.

2014년 9월 9일 화요일

Research

source: What is the Mental Skills Traing?

http://blog.yourstage.com/ksy6922/1785

My topic:
There is relationship that affect the game between sports and human mind.

What I hope to learn from this source:
I want to know some examples that can support my topic.

Noets:

1.  Mental Skills Training For Sports is mental training that make players best condition by controling their feeling or thinking for overcoming their stress in situation of extreme tension.

2. Park In Bee said  'Mental Skills Training helps me win the game'

3. Human Mind have an effect on result of game.


Final Thoughts:
This source make my thought solid. I can get suppoting data that make my topic strong. I need additional data that can attck my opponents.

Research


Sports Psychotherapy
 
source:

sports psychotherapy exist behind the althete like yuna kim
http://www.sportsq.co.kr/news/articleView.html?idxno=2556

my topic:

There is relationship that affect the game between sports and human mind.
 
What I hope to learn from this source

I want to get some examples to support my topic that supplement the comfirmation.


Notes:

1. Sports Psychotherapy eliminate player's anxiety and restore their confidence.

2. Today, Most athlete think that pleasure is more important than urgency.



Final Thoughts:

This source can be enough to use for my comfirmation. This article show that Sports Psychotherapy is very important for athlete. Player's a mental state can be one of the factor that determine result of game.
 

Research Proposal

What is my current topic?
My research question is 'What kind of relationship is between sports and human mind? It will solve curiosity of those who wonder the cause of sports game's result.

What are my guiding questions?
I want to know it is real that sports can be manipulated by human mind.

What are my current thoughts?
My oppinion is sports and human mind are related. There are so many examples about it.

What is the opposition?
My opposition will say sports and human mind are not related. Maybe they say the result of sports game is just decided althete's effort.

2014년 8월 28일 목요일

Research Question

- Do the human mind affect our life?
- What kind of relationship between sports and the human mind?
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